Whisper in the Wind

A friends struggle...

Whispers of the wind, a single breath, a blink of the eye. You were gone...

I wake up in the dark room, alone and confused. My hands were cold, my eyes are 
vague and distant. The reason behind my smile is no more. Every breath is heavy 
and incomplete, my heartbeat is hollow and weak. Agony in every fiber of my 
being, failure with the energy of my soul. My cheeks soaked with an all too 
familiar liquid, the airway of my throat is now useless and filled with the 
inconsistent, varying sobs of sorrow. All I see is black and white shadows, not 
a single ray of lightcoming from the window. The wind is cold and loneliness 
fills my gaze. 

In a single moment "Where have you gone?" Those vivid alluring eyes, those warm 
hands once intertwined with mine. That innocent smile that perked up my 
mornings, that beautiful girl who gave color, definition and meaning to my 
world... 

Gone... Like the whisper of the wind...

Reviews

[Just Plain Me]

This is so sad! It's amazing, don't get me wrong, and it's written amazingly. lol But it's so sad! I

[Matthew Kult]

Beautifully written but very sad. Where have you gone says it all....great read and write.

Regards,

Matthew

[Lydia Blackwell]

This is beautiful and sad. I think all of us have been there at one time or another, facing the loss of someone who meant so much to us. No matter what we dream up to fill our days, people still need each other, still rely on each other, still are most happy when together vs. alone. Nice write, sweetheart.

[Tate Morgan]

this is relly great

[universe-explorer]

i kind of relate myself to the write.

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lovely lament in prose..well done

[Dream Weaver]

Brilliant!! my brother...absoultely amazing...now ask me
if I liked it lol....Nicely done...