Missing You

Just a free write

Your face like a reoccuring dream,

　

A smile that I fall in love with again and again.

　

Those hands should'nt be so far away...

They should be right here, embracing mine.

　

You...

 

 

Are the sunrise to my morning,

the bright moon to my night sky,

the reason behind my smile...

 

 

No words can describe how I feel for you,

but 3 words can come close...

 

 

 

"I LOVE YOU..."

 

 

Come home back to me soon...

 

I miss my mornings,

I miss my nights,

I miss my smile...

 

 

 

Reviews

[ajasminewallflower]

I love this so much. It reminds me of my best friend and her man so much. Definatly sending a read request to her. Its so simple yet explains everything to a tee and thats the best kind of poetry in my book.

[Sonita Pal]

Beautiful and anybody would read this and be moved to riteous thoughts, short sweet and simple..

[Lydia Blackwell]

I think this is one of your best. It is simple, yet so so heartfelt and sweet. I can feel the genuineness coming out in this one. It is the simple things that you miss and that, to me, is love. it shows that you do not take those little things for granted. I love the last line- it says volumes- you say- I miss MY smile. which says more than saying you miss hers. Very good write- shows maturity and thought. A+ :)

[jex]

this is amazingly gorgeous. I love how you write. It's so unique and in it's own way sweet.

[Fleur-de-lys]

I love how you write:

"I miss my mornings,
I miss my nights,
I miss my smile..."

, and all in comparison to your love. Really brings forth the idea that love is like oxygen, love is life, for there would be no life without waking and sleeping, and life would be pointless without the urge to smile.

Great read!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a heartfelt gorgeous poem. It is pure love that flows from these lines with an almost pleading for the person to return. the is done nicely and the flow is smooth

[Unloved_kitty]

This is a beautiful poem
Great write
Keep it up !
~x~

[HappyTaylor]

I know how this feels and I can really relate!! I love this poem. It's beautiful!

[Kiba-chan]

the structure is odd, but strangly works well for this poem. sadly everything i would comment about this poem has already been said~ haha,

this is fantastic work and i hope to see more of it!

[RTB]

i miss my smile too good write keep at it u kno wut ur doing in poetry