Please Don't Fall Down

I dont want to see you on the ground...

 

For the past four months, I have been watching

Being so tired and worried from praying

Hoping that you will finally open your eyes

And see where people’s true hearts lies

 

They take advantage of you from time to time

And I see you fall and cry every time.

So much problems that you must face alone

And all I could do was talk to you on the phone

 

My heart breaks whenever I see you cry

So much pain I would much rather die.

Yet you seem to make the same mistake,

I don’t know how much more I can take.

 

And now that you just told me to go away

I don’t have any choice whether to stay

Promise me one thing before I leave what I have worked for

Just promise me, please just please don’t fall down anymore.

 

 

 

Reviews

[ruth]

By reading your poems, i just enjoy how it feels like if you are talking to someone. I like your choice of words, and you're poems seem comforting.=)
you really care for this person, and i like the last line, "please just please don't fall anymore"
-ruth