Do You Know?

About a girl at my school...

You walk through the door

in all your fair beauty.

Do you know i exist?

 

You walk past me once

in the hallway.

Do you know who i am?

 

You smile at me once

when i am in the office.

Do you know how stunning you are?

 

Your pale blonde hair

and flawless fair skin...

Your gorgeous eyes

and luminescent smile...

 

You truly must be

a princess...

Author's Note

Side note: i have defeated ((some of)) my OCD! <- SEE! Only one exclamation mark!

And yes, i wrote a poem about a girl. in case you're wondering, i AM indeed "straight". Not that it matters.

Edit- Sept. 7: i know her name now. =)

Reviews

[~Lizzy♬]

This is very good. Love this poem :)

[Poetry Girl]

nice author's note! haha. i think many guys feel this way about girls and many girls feel this way about guys (not the princess part though haha) so you really accomplished how many people feel. well done, i like it!

[Crusaderscross]

Nice innocent write. Reminds me of being a shadow and not by choice....looking to be noticed but never seen....quite nice..liked it a lot

Will keep reading you

[Dana Kathryn]

Ahh,You are awesome girl!!

[HappyTaylor]

I love it!! I wish I knew who that is!

[Mr. Revan]

interesting...

lol. very nice work.