if...

First two verses of a song my Twin wrote. =)

if a buttercup could be

a wallaby,

you'd see

how cute it is

with all its frizz...

 

and if the wallaby could be

a bumblebee

in a tree

he'd make lots of honey

for me...

 

 

Reviews

[Poetry Girl]

i love the way the poem sounds as im saying it (im reading it aloud haha) it has a good rhythm and i realy like it. i think what i like the most is that every last word rhymes in every line.

[Aislinn Gryffin ((Ashes..]

Twin is amazing. =)

[John Stussy]

It's cute and whimsical. I like it :)