Magnetic Poem #1

Made this earlier today. I got bored. I love magnetic poetry

Your velvet voice speaks words of poetry.

They softly surround me in perfume smoke.

Your laugh is magic healing the heart of me,

That once a devious demon had broke.

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

I don't understand what magnetic poetry consists of, but it the poem makes sense to me. Good job. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[V. Lucien Maier]

good use of limited words. That is cool. if you like this method try pick four or five very obscure words and work them into a poem. you might enjoy it.

[Lauren Marie]

I love the synesthesia that you used in this piece.
A nice, short, and sweet piece of poetry.
There's always a secret meaning behind poetry, that only the author knows about, and this poem even has an air of mystery surrounding it.
Love!
~Lauren

[..R.I.P..]

LOVE IT!!! I've felt this way lately about Shane, so I can relate. Amazing piece. :)
~PJ