Back To Me

A poem

Come home, Sunshine
I miss
Your bright
Smile

I need you more than the air I breathe

Clouds cover, you
Where has
The light
Gone

I need you more than the words I speak

I need you back to make my heart beat

Oh, Sunshine, where have you gone?
You took away my heart
Bring it back
Please
But come back too
It's dark without you

Author's Note

first poem for years, so help wanted! ^^
Unstructedness is intentional though...

Reviews

[Beatrice Mars]

OoO squee! I love it!!

Clouds cover, you

is the comma needed there? other than awesome!!! flows really well, great write!