You are the world I want to be in

About how someone led me to peace and happiness when I was so dis trusting of everyone and how I just wanted the peace and happiness

You were there
Shining bright like stars
On a clear inky night
You are the world I want to be in

You smiled
Radiating like the beautiful dappled sunrise
On a clear crisp morning
You are the world I want to be in

You were gentle
Like the big billowing clouds
High in the vivid blue sky
You are the world I want to be in

You opened your Soul
And lovingly let me in
I am here
In the world I want to be in

Author's Note

I am new here, my punctuation is atrocious so please ignore any lack of it. Can you see my story in this poem?

Reviews

[Trisha Hallam]

I am sorry, I'm not really sure what I am meant to put in this box, this is the first of my work. I love to write poetry and stories . This poem is how I arrived at peace in my life.