THE ENDLESS MORTAL

DEPRESSION

The ancient time left us with future thought
hopes of grace we never left to feel
              wallowing in sorrow,
the bone join in bitterness through the marrow.

we were left out of the indigence of grace,
 Life a mystery in times of pain
the smiles in us give way to pain
death we seek, but we were rejected by him
glowing in the cage we are
outside we see but all are white

Far beyond we see the luminous
nearer it came with eagerness we wait
hoping this is it, nearer, nearer and then it goes higher.
climb we climb up but down we are.
In deep dejection we dwell
our head deep down in sorrow
in pain all eternity we dwell.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Death Girl]

Very well done. You cought my attention right at the begining and made me want to read the rest. job well done

[Emily]

You got my attention at the first line! Well done.

[Alex]

Thanks, am really grateful for your review.

[Alex]

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