STOP!

Poem

 

Stop!

 

Drop everything,

 

Don’t move,

 

Look around,

 

Take a breath,

 

Smell the flowers,

 

Notice me.

 

I need help,

 

Help me from myself,

 

Stop!

 

Drop everything,

 

I need you,

 

Notice me,

 

Help me,

 

Save me,

 

Stop!

 

It’s going too fast,

 

Time’s moving too slow,

 

Drop everything,

 

Don’t move,

 

Look around,

 

Take a breath,

 

Do you notice me yet?

 

Stop!

 

I need help,

 

Hear me out,

 

Look around,

 

Take a breath,

 

STOP!

 

Do you notice me yet?

Author's Note

Don't be afriad to totally rag on it... LOVE open critisizm!

Reviews

[TheMizFit]

It's weird 'cause I think it's a little vague. It is amazing, though. I love how per line, it uses one to at most 5 words and it builds up some kind of tension. Good job! :)