morning in May

morning in May

A Poem by Triny Silverglass

A Poem every day

that's what i decided in May

as a little treat

for my far away sweet.


So many things to tell

i start with the sound of the bell

ringing exactly at nine

today the sun does not shine


strong wind shakes the trees

keeps away the bumblebees

and the squirrel hides under the roof

now i have a certain proof.


The cat comes back from a fight

he probably had outside

and as things here unfold

my coffee gets cold.



I wish i could tell something exciting

about pirates ships, thunder and lightning

stories about witches and ghosts

of whales seen at the coasts


about the green old snake

sleeps in the grass by the lake

tales of virgins kept in bird cages

as i've seen on illustrated pages.


Here only work with my tax declaration

again they're on strike at the Station

another day without you

how will i make it through?


the hours long as bubblegum

till you finally come back to Hamm.

© 2015 Triny Silverglass


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Hello, the poem is okay, but I give it to you in the area of rhymes. You really did justice to it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Triny Silverglass

9 Years Ago

thank you Mike
what a delightful vision of a day in your life...all that is and allthat is not in a wonderful word tapestry...well dine...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Triny Silverglass

9 Years Ago

i love your words, thank you
my darling,how i long to be with you and i will so soon. one day to get ready, one more for my business, then onto my plane and into your arms.

ich liebe dich

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Triny Silverglass

9 Years Ago

oh finally you saw it, it's for you sweety!
This is sweet, beautiful, and I love the way it rhymes.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Triny Silverglass

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot D.T.
I enjoyed the poetry. Gave may reason and purpose for the month of May. I like the places and visions create by your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Triny Silverglass

9 Years Ago

and i enjoyed your comment, thank you
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
It always a hearty to read your lines...full of rhythm and beautiful all time!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Triny Silverglass

9 Years Ago

i really enjoy your comments, thank you
Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Years Ago

You're welcome friend...
Oh mundane days ..but I have a sense you never let yourself get bored, not with that imagination. Beautiful pictures you paint with words in this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Triny Silverglass

9 Years Ago

oh, sometimes i can get very bored :), but i try to fight it. Thank you for your nice comment!
So lucidly portrayed that i could see myself in your place.....:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Triny Silverglass

9 Years Ago

thank you Phoenix, makes me smile

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Triny Silverglass
Triny Silverglass

Pirates Bay, ME



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