My Green Homelands

My Green Homelands

A Poem by TrimarcoRansome
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I sit amongst the Wiltshire green hills, when I need inspiration or any thing else that money does not buy, Mother Nature, she always provides.

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Lolloping amid the hills of chalk green
Indigenous aromas wafting on breeze
Blue butterflies dancing the sun
At one, at peace with this stalwart one

Entwined in mystical powers that be
Cocooned at our Mother's mercy
The oracle of our inner most soul
She walks palm to palm wise and old
 
Taking in the drifting clouds
My abode, my childhood ground
As my cobbled life unfolds before me
She supplies my sage of muted muse

Sprawling before me those rolling hills
Held within the bosom of her mighty force
Upholding her promise betrothing this land
Sacred I take it covenant bound





© 2014 TrimarcoRansome


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My Dear Writing Friend From Across The Pond,
This muse is a prime example of why I find your works so enthralling. You with this colorful word tapestry have placed me there with you to smell, see, feel, and hear nature as she sings a melody that transforms us who seek her.
I loved your choice of word with your use of “stalwart”, a word that was unfamiliar to this writer. I have posted its definition below. A word that helped this piece of art pop with color!
My favorite line was “She walks palm to palm wise and old”, this made total sense to me. As usual a poem well worth the muse before my fire.

Blessings, Your BillBear

stalwart |ˈstôlwərt|
adjective
loyal, reliable, and hardworking : he remained a stalwart supporter of the cause.
• dated strongly built and sturdy : he was of stalwart build.
noun
a loyal, reliable, and hardworking supporter or participant in an organization or team : the stalwarts of the Ladies' Auxiliary.
DERIVATIVES
stalwartly |ˈstɔlwərtli| adverb
stalwartness |ˈstɔlwərtnəs| noun
ORIGIN late Middle English : Scots variant of obsolete stalworth, from Old English stǣl ‘place’ + weorth [worth.]


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TrimarcoRansome

11 Years Ago

After just reviewing 'It's an Alaskan Kind of day' BillBear and writing almost word for word as you .. read more



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My Dear Writing Friend From Across The Pond,
This muse is a prime example of why I find your works so enthralling. You with this colorful word tapestry have placed me there with you to smell, see, feel, and hear nature as she sings a melody that transforms us who seek her.
I loved your choice of word with your use of “stalwart”, a word that was unfamiliar to this writer. I have posted its definition below. A word that helped this piece of art pop with color!
My favorite line was “She walks palm to palm wise and old”, this made total sense to me. As usual a poem well worth the muse before my fire.

Blessings, Your BillBear

stalwart |ˈstôlwərt|
adjective
loyal, reliable, and hardworking : he remained a stalwart supporter of the cause.
• dated strongly built and sturdy : he was of stalwart build.
noun
a loyal, reliable, and hardworking supporter or participant in an organization or team : the stalwarts of the Ladies' Auxiliary.
DERIVATIVES
stalwartly |ˈstɔlwərtli| adverb
stalwartness |ˈstɔlwərtnəs| noun
ORIGIN late Middle English : Scots variant of obsolete stalworth, from Old English stǣl ‘place’ + weorth [worth.]


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TrimarcoRansome

11 Years Ago

After just reviewing 'It's an Alaskan Kind of day' BillBear and writing almost word for word as you .. read more
Impressed by the eloquent expression.

Posted 11 Years Ago


TrimarcoRansome

11 Years Ago

Thank you, when you use topics you feel a passion for, the words flow easily
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
I could the feel the passion in your work.
"lolloping" i haven't heard that for ages..it made smile, i knew just what you meant.

The metaphors are wonderful , and i was carried away into the landscape.

You write the most beautiful poems Helen....

Posted 11 Years Ago


TrimarcoRansome

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Stella. This is one of my favorites as it is the place I get inspired when feeling a litt.. read more
Well done. I enjoy pieces that give vision of the places that shape us and this one most certainly does. I loved the word choices here - bethroning, covenant and a few others which gave a really nice mix of old and sacred befitting the subject matter.
Reading this all I could think of was Basil Rathbone reciting "this sceptered isle".

Posted 11 Years Ago


TrimarcoRansome

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your comments, this is the most inspiring place for me, i have written books, articles.. read more
A passion for our Mother I love to see in our sisters and brothers. I recently wrote Dream Catcher expressing the same sentiment. Splendid read and write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


TrimarcoRansome

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, i will have a read, is it on here?
Brandon S. Whitten

11 Years Ago

Yes and you are welcome.
I know now why I like this writing it tells a coherent story that i can follow beginning to end.That is the difference in you and others I like it

Posted 11 Years Ago


TrimarcoRansome

11 Years Ago

I see the common ground in your Mother Natures Sons, children who can play and explore adventure hav.. read more
Tate Morgan

11 Years Ago

We are kind of a kindred spirit
Tha land is sacred. You show how the soil walks with us, even too us as we accept her gifts.
I was thinking how special and individual it feels to walk the land and feel directly how she does meet each of us if we will seek her.
Beautifully penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


TrimarcoRansome

11 Years Ago

Thank you! We have much to learn from the world around us
A splendid read and write...Thank you for shring...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


TrimarcoRansome

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
bravo my friend the imaging in this poem was immaculate :) a good write filled with sweet nostalgia :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


TrimarcoRansome

11 Years Ago

Thanks Peter!
beautiful imagery and use or words, really beautiful piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


TrimarcoRansome

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words.

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Added on June 11, 2013
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Tags: Wiltshire, home, nature, inspitation

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TrimarcoRansome
TrimarcoRansome

Southampton, United Kingdom



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Biography .Helen Trimaro-Ransome grew up in the Wiltshire countryside which hugely inspired her many creative talents and has remained working in creative fields during her adult life. After sitting .. more..

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