Forever is ours

How many tears must I spill for your love

If you were to wish for a lake I would cry till my death

 

How many men must I kill for your heart

I would run every river red just to hear its beautiful beat

 

If you choose my death for your soul

Then I will march one man, against any army and pray it be swift

 

If it cost the sun for your body

Then with only the bones of my hands I shall pull it from the sky

 

No ocean to deep, no star to far away

Forever I'll love you

Forever is ours

 

Author: M.Rose

Author's Note

I was challenged to write something more positive I usally dont write romance so here you go.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Positivity is mere conjecture of truth, a very well prosed piece, detailed with decremental emotion, well done great read.

[Allie :)]

This is very good, and well thought out! Your details are exquisite.

[mooney]

Wow!

[Magdelena]

Darn great job too! This was deep and sensual in a surreal way.. I adored the path it took..

Mags xx

[Corvus]

Very, very beautiful. Just one error. You say 'prey it be swift', yet I think you mean 'pray'. It's a common mistake. Otherwise, this is beautiful, and I can't wait to read more of your work. It shows such a devotion to one's lover,.

[SummerJoy60]

Wow! Beautiful! touches the soul . . .

[Michael X]

really great, powerful opening that takes a common theme and makes it
original, which shows the mark of a poet in action. romantic and detailed,
excellent job.

[R.S. Wilder]

Oh my my my...I'm blushing. :)

[Tai Chi Italy]

highly romantic write here. A refreshing read with imagery more in tune with the male psychi than a lot that I read. Well done. I hope she gets the gist and your present muse thrives.

Smiling at you

Tai

[~AmateurWriter]

Wow. A very beautiful and deep, yet dark poem.
If only there were more guys who cared that much..