Retort

Retort

A Poem by Mister Rat
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I'm not bullied anymore, otherwise I stand up for myself.

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For someone with no friends don't you think this is cruel.
Why would you want to break down such a used up tool.
Why not start fresh and find another place to leave your hurt?

Now it's only like you're talking to a lost cause or a pile of old dirt.

Why do you still stay here yearning for a reaction.
Why is someone's pure agony your personal satisfaction.

What happened to you to make you this way?

Your heart is drenched in the poison of this world.
You're a blind fool, your mind is tightly furled.

For someone with no love your life is the price you pay.

© 2013 Mister Rat


Author's Note

Mister Rat
I was bored... Enjoy my crap! :B

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Some people loss in anothers gain. A bully may lose a part of himself by what he does to others, but the people that deal with it and overcome, become stronger in spite of all.
Opening up is the way to do it. Keep writing, its good, and thanks!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mister Rat

11 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so much!

And you're welcome I guess! : D
Well, you may call it crap, but I loved it. I diffenitely think you should continue writting. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mister Rat

11 Years Ago

I was just kidding, but thanks a lot. :>

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Added on February 1, 2013
Last Updated on February 3, 2013
Tags: bully, bullies, poetry, poem

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Mister Rat
Mister Rat

Racine, WI



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