Just Right

I dug this out of my old account and I have to say I'm pretty proud of this. Except I have no idea how I missed the grammatical errors...

You're a fictional character you have no being.
Although invisible you see what I'm seeing.
You can imagine the feel.
But I fear that you shouldn't be real.

There's a darkness in this wistful thinking.

In this world of fire and scissors.
Paper cannot keep you sealed.
You're a box of fragile memories with the tape peeled.

Author's Note

I'm still too lazy to fix my punctuation, sorry to the people who get annoyed by that.
Moreover, I'm guessing this poem's about an original character of mine that I wished was real.

Reviews

[Kitt]

THe rhyme in the poem helped the flow soothly. I liked how you compared the world to sissors and fire.

[Mister Rat]

Thanks so much, I appreciate the feedback.

[KatDarkness]

Great poem, very strong imagery :)

[Mister Rat]

I'm glad you liked it. : D

[Holly Mason]

like this much thanks for the read

[Mister Rat]

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it. : >