I feel

But its not his fault, and its not my fault either.

I feel so unloved,
All alone,
In the deepest hells of my soul.

I love you,
But you can't love me,
You don't really know,
What I feel towards you.

I feel so unloved
So alone,
Left in my mind,
Stranded in Hell.

Just a smile from you,
And I'll be alright.

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

This is a good write my friend... sometimes it helps to just get things off your chest and let those raw emotions spill onto a sheet. For me, it helps kind of move past those feelings :) Good work

[A writer]

Thank you :) and yeah, it helps.

[Shah Sabia]

So true.
Indeed a very good write.
And by the way, glad you got that smile ;)

[A writer]

Thank you :)

[Shah Sabia]

You're welcome.
All i want to say is that sometimes in life, you ought to understand that certain things aren't meant to be. You should feel good about your feelings, be proud while expressing them. Instead dont feel unloved, i am sure God has something far better for you in store. No doubt for the time being you wont feel it, but believe me it goes this way. Please be well, and keep writing.

[A writer]

I know. But I love Danny. And no, I am no stalker. I simply love him.

[Shah Sabia]

I understand that completely.
I guess love means to actually "love" somebody without expecting their part in return, right ? And you're doing the same. If it'd be destined, i'm more than sure to say that it'll definitely happen no matter what. But if its not destined, i am afraid it might not even end up well. You know this destiny, it is such a deceptive thing.

[A writer]

Eh... I don't really care if it is meant to be or not, all I know is, that I love him. With all my being.

[Vernika]

Sometimes a simple smile from the one we love is all that's needed. It really has magical powers..! Nice poem. I like the simplicity and honesty it has been crafted with. :)

[A writer]

Thank you very much :) As for his smile... He loves someone else...so not counting to see that smile. Anyways, thank you.

[Vernika]

Your welcome! And good luck for life. You'll definitely find a smile that is meant for you! ;)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Atleast he knows why i don't love him. Again, nice poem.

[A writer]

Thank you both. :) I still love you Danny.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

i know...you tell me a hundred times every day...lol.

[A writer]

That is because I love you Danny boy :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, you know why i don't love you, cuz i love someone else. Since i love him with all my being, i can imagine what you feel...but i can't tell my feelings to change course...not like i want to... Here's that smile :)

[A writer]

I know, Danny. I just have to write about it, I guess. Thanks for the smile, made my night...lol :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay, seems like you got it under controll. Nice poem by the way.

[A writer]

Thank you :) :) :)