When?

Wrote this to Danny.

Your strong arms,
Keep me from the ways of harms.

Your heart,
Keeps me from the dark.

Your eyes,
Keep me in sights.

Your love
Your ever flaming love,
Keeps me in the light of day,
Melts off the ice,
Protects in the dark of night.

Your soul,
Ever so beautiful,
Like a hidden world,
Unclaimed,
Wild,
Untamed,
Playful like a child.

See you again,
But when?

Author's Note

Any thoughts?

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow!
Classical, romantic and utterly beautiful poem!
Keep writing boy!
Lovely piece!

PS: Finally, I see Danny is not alone in the proclamation of love! Bless u both!

[A writer]

Thank you :-) And no, he's not alone. I wont let him down like his ex did.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are very welcome!

[Tomoe Tellez]

This has a bittersweet taste, which made me like it even more. Great write!

[A writer]

Thank you so much :-)

[Shah Sabia]

Beautifully written, too good.
The best part according to me is the sincerity that is felt while reading :)

[A writer]

Thank you so much :) If only Danny would think the same... Again, thanks.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

The poem is nice, but i don't love you Writer...keep that in mind, when you write poems about me, or about your love. Thats all.

[A writer]

I know... But I still love you Danny :)

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up !!

[A writer]

Thank you :) I'll be writing. :)

[B]

A very open way of admiring your love
Its wonderful how the one
Makes this soul open up and be free
Taking us into a world of happiness
never to return to pain

Utterly gorgeous

[A writer]

Thank you :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol...he's writin poems about me...lol. Sorry writer, but i can't return that.

[B]

lol hehehehehe

[A writer]

I know Danny. But, I still love you gorgeous.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay...what am i supposed to say to that? lol

[A writer]

I don't know cutie. You tell me. Lol. But seriously... I'm sooo in love with you.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay lover boy...lol. then stop botherin other people with your love...i think this is a friend's review, not mine...think about what happens when she opens all those notifications...i'm pretty sure she wont be too happy to see this.

[B]

its ok lol

[A writer]

Yup... I knew that :) lol

[Dani The Unreviewed]

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[J Lee]

So i know im new and all. And I'm pretty sure none of this is my business.... But WTF is going on here? I'm so confused. Am i missing out on a joke or something? Or is there reason for alarm?

[B]

no we are just joking

[J Lee]

Lol. Alrighty. Like I said, im new. For a second i thought i joined up with some stalker community and Danny was about to be a part of someone's sick "misery" fantasy. Haha

[B]

no no its all good we are joking

[Dani The Unreviewed]

We are??? really? LOL LOL HAHAHA LOL.

[B]

yes lol
i am always joking
i get serious like 2% of my day

[Dani The Unreviewed]

LOL. thats cool :)

[B]

Well it does the heart much good to slow down
and just enjoy life
with no serious attitude :P

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome work! I enjoyed it :)

[A writer]

I'm glad you enjoyed it :) thanks for reading.

[Satan]

this one made me smile :)

[A writer]

Thank you so much :)

[Vernika]

Just love the flow of the poem. Flawless! :)

[A writer]

Thank you :)