When?

When?

A Poem by A writer
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Wrote this to Danny.

"
Your strong arms,
Keep me from the ways of harms.

Your heart,
Keeps me from the dark.

Your eyes,
Keep me in sights.

Your love
Your ever flaming love,
Keeps me in the light of day,
Melts off the ice,
Protects in the dark of night.

Your soul,
Ever so beautiful,
Like a hidden world,
Unclaimed,
Wild,
Untamed,
Playful like a child.

See you again,
But when?

© 2015 A writer


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Wow!
Classical, romantic and utterly beautiful poem!
Keep writing boy!
Lovely piece!

PS: Finally, I see Danny is not alone in the proclamation of love! Bless u both!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A writer

9 Years Ago

Thank you :-) And no, he's not alone. I wont let him down like his ex did.
Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome!
This has a bittersweet taste, which made me like it even more. Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A writer

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :-)
Beautifully written, too good.
The best part according to me is the sincerity that is felt while reading :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


A writer

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) If only Danny would think the same... Again, thanks.
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

The poem is nice, but i don't love you Writer...keep that in mind, when you write poems about me, or.. read more
A writer

9 Years Ago

I know... But I still love you Danny :)
amazingly written keep it up !!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A writer

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) I'll be writing. :)
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B
A very open way of admiring your love
Its wonderful how the one
Makes this soul open up and be free
Taking us into a world of happiness
never to return to pain

Utterly gorgeous

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

B

9 Years Ago

yes lol
i am always joking
i get serious like 2% of my day
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

LOL. thats cool :)
B

9 Years Ago

Well it does the heart much good to slow down
and just enjoy life
with no serious atti.. read more
Awesome work! I enjoyed it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A writer

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it :) thanks for reading.
this one made me smile :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A writer

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Just love the flow of the poem. Flawless! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A writer

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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