Window

My collaboration with Danny :) i hope you'll like it.

Transparent,
Wrong parent,
Not omnipotent.

Just glass,
Not green, like grass,
Only a wooden frame it has,
Other than the glass.

It shows you the outside,
While you can rest on the inside,
You can open it,
Let in fresh air,
A breeze through your hair.

The window,
Always there,
But everyone just looks through,
They don't see it,
They see the things behind it,
Sometimes they even break it.

But they all need a window,
To look through,
For hope,
For strength,
Or just to see if the storm passed,
A view on the green grass,
Through the transparent glass,
Important role the window has.

Author's Note

Lol. Okay, i say its a collaboration. But the good lines are all originally from Danny. Untoched. Even the title. As for me... I had the begining done, and i asked him to help me out. Now the fact that he could make up something like this in this little time, and so little to start with...is incredible to me. Which makes me a bigger fan of his work. :) i hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[JustMe]

Great wtiting! Keep it up! :-)

[A writer]

Thank you! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay...now you're too kind. :) anyways, i'm waiting to see what people will think about the meaning of this.

[A writer]

Me too. I'm thinking they will like it. Yeah, its mostly your work. :) and so most credit goes to you. It was amazing. The fact that i could work with you, is simply amazing. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay. Okay. You're taking it too far now. Lol. Thank you for the opportunity to work with you :)

[Joel Armstrong]

You guys have done good.I liked it

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[A writer]

Hi. Thank you so much. :)