Stage made for two?

Life upon my stage,

The lonely star but all things change.

As I walk never changing pace,

I turn and see her face.

Beauty undefined,

This will remain for I shall not try.

My feeble words could never describe,

Nor even dignify.

Safe to say she caught my eye,

Pulled me in with a mere glance

Is this fate?

Or  happenstance?

A familiar burn within my breast,

A swift return from nothingness.

Perhaps what they say is true,

 all stages are made for two.

With all the courage I can invest.

I shall see what happens next.

Reviews

[The Old Ashes]

Oh this goes PERFECT with the story "trouble"!
you should put the two together- it will add such an effect to the story.
I like your poetry, I think you are strongest as a poet after reading this.
Keep up the great work.
P.s.
you should add this too the end of "trouble"
100/100

[Zackery Alan Daley]

There you go homie. Beautiful. Almost a perfect score if it would have been longer. Great work MAN.

[Caitlynxoxo]

"A familiar burn within my breast,
A swift return from nothingness.
Perhaps what they say is true,
all stages are made for two."

this was so well written! i loved it! the description was amazing, and the words painted an image that we as readers can relate to! :) thanks for sharing!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo