Sleep

Oh sleep how i tire of your elusive ways,

we play your cat and mouse game as night turns into day.

Oh sleep how bitter sweet you are, 

 whenever i find you  dawn is never far.

Reviews

[Helpless]

i like this one, gives the reader a peaceful feeling at the beginning and a feeling of curiousity at the end

[Geralyn Miller]

Short, sweet, a complete idea in a concise package.
I wrote on the same topic, title: "Insomnia" check it out.

[KAREN]

Excellent job! It makes me think of people who can't sleep and enjoy it when sleep happens!

[just take a breath]

great(: i like the subject you used. its not something that you ready about everyday. again, like the last poem of yours, i think you could make it a little longer. but maybe thats just my oppinion?

all in all, pretty good
-marissa

[MuSe Ampoule]

Insomniacs Uni...zzz..zzz..zz
This was good! Short and sweet and didn't actually make me fall asleep (I was kidding). I have one with the same title you should read...an earlier work.

Creative minds are often kept up at late hours! :)

[Im His Daughter]

Id say ignore or erase the first comment! This is so awesome! Great job!

[Calypso]

Very true. I find my self fighting sleep all the time, but if I nap then the day as passed!

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Put more effort in your genius talent youy f*g.