Like A Balloon.

Maybe decent for my first attempt at something "happy".

What’s make believe?

Well.. nothing.

You can achieve,

Almost anything.

Like a balloon,

To the sky,

Towards the moon,

You can fly.

Peter Pan,

He was right.

Take my hand,

Let’s fly, tonight.

Through the stars,

Past the sun,

Over Mars,

All thinking is done.

We’re together,

What could go wrong?

Let’s stay forever,

Forever young.

Reviews

[paperdaydreams]

I love this, it's such a beautiful little poem. The verse
'Peter Pan,
He was right.
Take my hand,
Let’s fly, tonight'
is lovely, it's something everyone can relate to and I just love the whole thing. You seem to use a similar lay out in all your poems and i think it's great because it's like your own little style :)

[Trevor]

Thank you so much. (:

[The Invisible Girl]

This is my favorite! It was so well-written and the words flowed beautifully together! :D
Keep it up! 100/100
-Invisible Girl :)

[Ella]

Trevor! This is beautiful! I love it, so well done. It's short but so sweet!