Oculus Animae
A Poem by
Treo LeGigeo
Six word story.
Through common eyes see only blindly.
© 2013 Treo LeGigeo
Author's Note
People who try to conform their beliefs to a prevalent view will only be obscured.
Written for a challenge: write a six word story with a title of something prominent in the world hidden in the story. I hid the word "money."
Reviews
Short but right to the point
This to me reminds me of quote
Beautiful
Posted 13 Years Ago
nice one do read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".
Posted 13 Years Ago
nice one do read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".
Beautiful.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Beautiful.
Very creative :)
Great work!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very creative :)
Great work!
short and simple but very clever, nice :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
short and simple but very clever, nice :)
nice one :D
Posted 13 Years Ago
nice one :D
Nice!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Nice!
Insightful one liner you have here.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Insightful one liner you have here.
very clever. nice job.
Posted 13 Years Ago
very clever. nice job.
good job. Simple, but elegant.
Posted 13 Years Ago
good job. Simple, but elegant.
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Added on September 6, 2011
Last Updated on June 16, 2013
Author
Treo LeGigeo Sydney, NSW, Australia
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I'm from Australia, so some people may find that I spell things differently. I love writing and have had a couple of publications of short stories and novellas under a pseudonym.
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