Forgotten

Six word story.

Past tears, memories fading in time

Time, in fading memories, tears past.

Author's Note

Definitely not my normal kind of piece, written for a challenge: write a six word story that can read left to right or right to left and make sense both ways.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

This is really good! I love how it can be read both ways and yet not sound forced or awkward. Great job!

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I really liked this poem and the words that were used were powerful and reading this poem both ways emits strong emotions well done

your light shades my darkness

Ashley Black

[KAREN]

I like it, makes stop and read it again and again. It works both ways! EXCELLENT!!

[Calypso]

Very true. For now life can seem hard to bear, but other times its better.

[Sunflower 20]

i like how which ever way you read it, it still tells the same story. Brilliant!

[Sarusai Hiryu]

nice wordplay.
In its own way, I'd say it really is something

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the loop forged inside the beating heart~memory memorialized~

[Kathryn Saunders]

i like your very very much, you were nice and creative with it! good luck! 10/10

[Pandora]

Nice, I love the words you chose, and the little variations on the end. Really awesome job!

[Jessica Harmony]

Great job on this challenge :)