Forgotten

Six word story.

Past tears, memories fading in time

Time, in fading memories, tears past.

Author's Note

Definitely not my normal kind of piece, written for a challenge: write a six word story that can read left to right or right to left and make sense both ways.

Reviews

[Sweets]

._. this is nice and full of meaning. A whole story could be written for that phrase!
Great work!

[Jazique]

Nice short simple poem with word of meaning left behind. Its like a one way street. Not bad.

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

Beautifully worded and simple. Thought provoking and interesting despite being only a few words.

[ebonpinion]

Actually quite creative.

[Cricket Kidd]

Nice. I didn't read your note at first, but I still figured it out. I like it! I've got to try that.

[EmpressPoetess]

Genius!

[Kesley]

I couldn't do that! Awesome!

[sarah]

Wow so little words but really great and powerful great write!

[A]

Magnificent, Impressive how you managed to put it this way