Not You

Not You

A Poem by Treo LeGigeo
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Love isn't always welcomed.

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I thought there was a black hole,
In my chest, where others have a heart.
I've hurt so many and not cared at all,
But now there's a feeling which just won't part.

I see you standing there,
A victim you would have been,
But now I sit and stare,
Now I think differently.

Your innocence and your beauty,
The look you have in your eyes,
Took me back abruptly,
Took me by surprise.

You befriended me, unaware,
Then started changing me too.
I can't continue, no I can't bear,
To do what I planned to do.

Is this love no it cannot be,
Surely that couldn't come from,
Someone as heartless as me,
Or perhaps I'm wrong.

This I've never felt before,
What is it that you do?
I only know that I can't hurt you anymore,
No, not you.

© 2013 Treo LeGigeo


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i love this :0

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow very interesting, It captivates the reader and keeps them reading on. Your word choice is wonderful. You have given a new insight to love, beautiful poem. It's well thought out in it's construction and arrangement, I liked it very much=]

Posted 13 Years Ago


A refreshingly different insight into love. Simply love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wonderfully written indeed, there's strong feeling in this poem, masterfuly penned I must say. Excellent work, romantic as well in a fashion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


More than like it, I truly love it!
That's a amazing poem, it's so sad, I love the ending most, while you said 'I only know that I can't hurt you anymore,No, not you.' That'a great ending for this poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it. :)
we put labels to ourself that when unexpected things happened, we're surprised that we can change our mind.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Just amazing. I loved this dearly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really liked it. Finding love in the weirdest of place is the best kind of love. Keep writing, I loved this peice:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awe its like wizard of oz tin man thought he didn't have a heart but thanks to his friends he had on all along. Spectacular writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw, this is adorable. (: A great closure to this adorable story.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 16, 2010
Last Updated on April 3, 2013
Tags: Romance, Love, Dark, Evil, Use, Heartless, Change, Hurt, No, Heart

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Treo LeGigeo
Treo LeGigeo

Sydney, NSW, Australia



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I'm from Australia, so some people may find that I spell things differently. I love writing and have had a couple of publications of short stories and novellas under a pseudonym. I started .. more..

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