8

There once was a little number eight,
Which took on itself to negate,
Freedom, right,
Before they finally saw the light,
It gets better now, state by state.

Author's Note

Yes, this is about Proposition 8.

The last line is a reference to It Gets Better.

For a limerick contest.

Reviews

[Jessica Harmony]

i really like this! it's a cute and well written little poem.

[Jasmine]

I like it. You get straight to the point.

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Nice piece about equality and a good relation to the it gets better campaign too. Well written.

[Luna Kusan]

I like it. It is short and to the point.

[Red Brick Keshner]

To infinity ∞, and beyond!

[Just Kim]

i like it, nicely done and stated!

[L. Fenella]

Neat!!!

[Coffee Vampier]

I am all for Proposition 8 and I love that someone (you) could right something so beautiful about it in such as beautiful way.

[Treo LeGigeo]

I'm guessing you mean against prop 8 (since that was the one that defined marriage as only between a man and a woman)? But anyway, glad you enjoyed.

[Coffee Vampier]

Oh lmao i have no idea why i said that "Im all for your poem on proposition 8" oops lol

[Tate Morgan]

Quite the limerick .Sorry i havent talked to you in a while

[Treo LeGigeo]

Oh hey :-) It has been a while. Thanks for the review. I'll be sure to check out some of your new stuff.

[Tate Morgan]

nice to hear from you