Empty Nest

Empty Nest

A Poem by Tremetol
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A short poem about a lot of things.

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To the thing that loved.
To the thing that cared.
To the thing that even wondered If I was really there.

Having never left the shell.
The words I spoke echoed quite well.
Speaking to the white to comfort myself at night.
It told me to explore a new height.
So hatching from my home, I sung for quite a spell.
Yet with no response, I learned, I always was in hell.

I slunk back inside the thing that was once my abode.
The soothing sound I knew had left me alone.
I felt that I was deeply marred.
I couldn't keep them from tearing me apart, scarred.
In the bottom of my shell, now red.
I wept for all the things I had before,
I realized I was dead.

To the thing that loved.
To the thing that cared.
To the thing that even wondered If I was ever really there.

Goodbye.

© 2024 Tremetol


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I really enjoyed the meter of your poem, it flowed very well.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Tremetol

3 Months Ago

Thanks for reviewing! I still feel like I have a lot to learn when it comes to meter. I'm glad this .. read more
Beautiful poem enjoyed reading

Posted 3 Months Ago


Tremetol

3 Months Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing! It was cathartic to write so it's a win-win!

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