draw your own conclusions

I fail to understand
what I could gain from you
your faith your face
and your voice is like a dream
heartless edgeless
it's the perfect sword
cut into the fog
and you're still there
alone among these thieves
alone among your greed
your face is like a meaning; symbolism isn't feeling
I wish I could have seen you
and your broken voice
your heartless drives
your mindless cries
and they say it's all revenge

Reviews

[hiralarious]

Woaaaaaaaah.
I have no words to describe this O:
Except that it's good. :D

[allonsy_doctor]

you are truely awesome...

[free ronnie radke!]

this poem is intense. you could yell it at someone and it'd still be beautiful