In the Rain

In the Rain

A Poem by Tree Bark
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OK, so at first i asked my friend Imperfectionist to post this for me because i almost didn't make an account but now i do so here it is...again. so it's probably not gonna be something new.

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In the rain i see bright smiles
Smiles drawn with many different styles
In the rain i hear loud laughter
These are the voices i will hear hereafter
In the rain i feel so surrounded
In every direction it seems so abounded
In the rain i smell death and decay
No matter how hard i try it won't go away
In the rain i taste fresh blood
In my mouth, it feels like a flood
In the rain i like dance so freely
Only because there's no one but me

© 2011 Tree Bark


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i love this piece so much...


Posted 13 Years Ago


Let's dance in the rain and let it wash away all our faults for a better tomorrow.

Truly touching.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Some like to waltz .. because it takes two ...

Interesting .. Jasmine

Posted 13 Years Ago


i wanna join in !!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Amazing! i love your writing!! keep on writing !

Posted 13 Years Ago


yayay!

Posted 13 Years Ago


But hey wait a minute I`ll be dancing with you in the rain ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


IN The Rain I Dance My Heart Out Cuz I`m Cool Like That Love the poem Marshmello :D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 8, 2011
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