In the Rain

In the Rain

A Poem by Tree Bark
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OK, so at first i asked my friend Imperfectionist to post this for me because i almost didn't make an account but now i do so here it is...again. so it's probably not gonna be something new.

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In the rain i see bright smiles
Smiles drawn with many different styles
In the rain i hear loud laughter
These are the voices i will hear hereafter
In the rain i feel so surrounded
In every direction it seems so abounded
In the rain i smell death and decay
No matter how hard i try it won't go away
In the rain i taste fresh blood
In my mouth, it feels like a flood
In the rain i like dance so freely
Only because there's no one but me

© 2011 Tree Bark


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very nice work, it's a different side of rain. it also is a good poem for everyone to read because of it's message.

Posted 13 Years Ago


great piece, its really different from other rain poems ive read! =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love this piece your feelings really shine through. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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love how the mood changed halfway through :) wonderful poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


"in the rain i LIKE dance so freely "
love that line !!

Posted 13 Years Ago


"In my mouth, it feels like a flood". That is my favourite line of this wonderful piece. It has great rhythm. Well done. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


very nice ...
well done ..keep'em up :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


ur poem is really nice write, do have a look to mine "QUEST OF LIFE"-
" this is about how one neglects his life ,pondering about this precious gift of nature unnecessarily ".

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love this... very deep.

Posted 13 Years Ago


:) so many thoughts ran through my mind reading this. It's unique, :) Nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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