OK, so at first i asked my friend Imperfectionist to post this for me because i almost didn't make an account but now i do so here it is...again. so it's probably not gonna be something new.
In the rain i see bright smiles Smiles drawn with many different styles In the rain i hear loud laughter These are the voices i will hear hereafter In the rain i feel so surrounded In every direction it seems so abounded In the rain i smell death and decay No matter how hard i try it won't go away In the rain i taste fresh blood In my mouth, it feels like a flood In the rain i like dance so freely Only because there's no one but me
ur poem is really nice write, do have a look to mine "QUEST OF LIFE"-
" this is about how one neglects his life ,pondering about this precious gift of nature unnecessarily ".
HI! my name is ________ and i lub nature and the creatures in them in :D. send me message if you want or if you know the answer to any of my riddles (which you can see under my name), but don't commen.. more..