Autumn

I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry.

it's autumn,
 i can hear the crackle of each leaf dancing on the pavement,
 i like to kick the leaves around to hear them dance again,
 i can feel the rough edges on each leaf that touches my face,
 i like to jump into the pile of dry colourful leaves,
 i feel the the wisp of the countless winds blowing through my fingers,
 i like to blow back to the cool breeze,
 i can smell the crisp leaves flying past me,
 i like to catch them and keep them in my fall box,
 i can see the delicate lily's petal slowly fall to the ground,
 i like to put the fallen petals onto my dead turtle's grave,
 i can watch the spectacular autumn events forever.
it's autumn and it's going to be indescribably Amazing!

Reviews

[Immortal Phantom]

very comforting and descriptive. great piece!

[paradise]

Autumn Is Awesome when you write it like tht "i like to kick the leaves around to hear them dance again" I like tht part :D

[Dove]

I love how you descrived autumn. Beautiful poem... i say that a lot but its true this is a very nice piece.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

wow nice poem !!! i like how you described the autumn