When it's broken

this is about my friend who gave up on love....shh don't tell her!

When it’s pinned,

It can be pulled out.

You can still sing,

You’ll live in peace.

When it’s ripped,

It can be sown.

You can still smile,

You’ll be alright.

When it’s torn in two,

It can be patched.

You can still dance,

You’ll be ok.

When it’s broken,

It can be fixed.

You can still love.

You can still live.

When it’s shattered,

It can‘t be fixed.

You can‘t live,

You’ll rest under irony.

Red roses of love, the cause and the pain.

Reviews

[Brandi Nicole]

yes, but it is when we are shattered that we find our real strength and worth. it is easier to see what you are made of when you are in a million pieces. so, you pick up what you can and what you really need. leave the rest of that baggage on the ground. you are still you, but just with a different composition and a whole lot of cracks (aka scars or battle wounds). :)

i've always loved scars...they give you character!

[TreeSpirit]

Wow.

[HeIsWe]

This is amazing, I can't think of any words to explain how I feel about it the best I can say is I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i didnt know you loved dude ???? jokes!!! good poem i really like the line "when its ripped,it can be sown."

[paradise]

Beautiful Tree It's amazing I know some people dont believe in Love but hey friends can still love each other right!!?? Right?? Love you TREE!!!

[~Artemis~]

I liked the simplicity- a lot. you used a lot of really good metaphors, some of them sounded a little familiar, but others were extremely interesting.

[Little Birdie]

I gave up on love too. Long time ago.