Tree Tops

Tree Tops

A Poem by Tree Bark
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I climbed a tree to see the top.
Never really wanting it to stop.
It swayed and flowed.
Making me loose my heavy load.


With every bird that flew by.
It seemed to be not that high.
And every leaf that fell to the floor.
Made me not wish for more.


And as the sun fell to the ground.
Satisfaction I seemed to have found.
As the stars sprinkled the sky.
It seemed to me that I could fly.

© 2011 Tree Bark


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I like it tree very simply and elegent with flow LOve it

Posted 13 Years Ago


You did a great job with the rhyme words. the first time i ever climbed a tree I was feeling kind of what you described in the first stanza. Keep up the good work,

Posted 13 Years Ago


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