Just Can't

Just Can't

A Poem by Tree Bark
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i am not good with long poems sorry

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Can’t breathe but can’t survive

Can’t hear but can’t listen

Can’t scream but can’t be silent

Can’t believe but can’t be neutral

Can’t stop shaking but can’t stand still

Can’t take it but can’t do anything

Can’t smile but can’t cry

Can’t see but can’t ignore

Can’t sleep but can’t wake up

Can’t live but can’t die

© 2011 Tree Bark


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thank you lots! coz people at my school usually says its not good if its short :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


:) I love the things you expressed. It's not a bad thing in my point of view, to not write long poems. I guess it just means you say what needs to be said without using a whole bunch of words. :) NIce write:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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