Later Buddy...

Later Buddy...

A Poem by Tree Bark
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this is from a certain anime show but i just turned the episode name into a poem. it is not very accurate though. but just so you know it's not from my point of view, it's from a guy's perspective k?

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heavy winds from every side
unnoticed betrayal from the right
he takes a glance at our next foe
and gives us a pep talk, "now go"
i wasn't as focused as i could be
so it seemed i was fighting too lazily
that's not the truth i am just heart broken
but i was too scared for it to be spoken

i couldn't as well as i should
so he had come in and punched me as hard as he could
it snapped me out of the hate
but once he left it was too late
he was stabbed and partially crushed
if only i had not given in to such lust
it was all my fault
even though i didn't cause the bloody assault

why did i care so much about that kiss?
she didn't even know i liked her, it's not hard to miss
but i guess big bro was the hero in her view
it's was probably because my honour was not as true
but wait...he's still alive!
he continued to strive
with his strong persistence he won our long battle

but it doesn't mean all was well
bro had not completely recovered
because with his last breath he told me something...

His last words were "Later Buddy"






© 2011 Tree Bark


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Tree Bark
it's long but not very good

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nice job

Posted 13 Years Ago


thank you! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


aw i like this one :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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