Distinct

Distinct

A Poem by Blotter
"

Grocery store, stranger, awkward posture.

"

Stranger in the store asks,

"how ya' doin'?"

and I say the nonsense

that you always say.

He doesn't bite.

"Working hard,

or hardly working?"

...he says it with a chuckle.

I want to choke him.

I want to want to feel bad at this...

but I don't.

I just want him to go away,

fade and blend into the miasma

of the city.

He does not;

he instead moves closer,

his B.O. and funk

enrobing me.

I desperately need to shout,

"please f**k off!"

Instead, I smile

and swallow the distinct sense

that I am not human...

...not as they are.

© 2013 Blotter


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really personal expression of the artistic "alien-ness" a unique voice certainly comes through. Excellent! (the casual repressed and satirically intolerant tone adds to the off humor really enjoyed it)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Blotter

11 Years Ago

thank you.

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Blotter
Blotter

tacoma, WA



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