I Miss You

It used to be that I was never there

then it became you never cared

How does someone just give up love?

I'm begging you to explain this just once

and tell me where does all that love go?

did you feel it or was it just for show?

cause you led me on and on and on

I'll suffocate myself with this song

how could you do this to me?

we were supposed to be

and I want you so badly

I need you, it's so maddening

cause I miss you

oh God I miss you

it used to be you loved me so much

but it seems you're grown out of touch

with emotions you've buried deep inside

I don't understand why you run and hide

How can you walk away after so long?

now I know the meaning of alone

and none of this really seems too fair

I'd give my life just to have you here

how could you do this to me?

we were supposed to be

and I want you so badly

I need you, it's so maddening

cause I miss you

oh God I miss you

I was all you needed before

why isn't that good enough anymore?

I thought we were forever

now we're not even together

I was all you needed before

why isn't that good enough anymore?

I thought we were forever

now we're not even together

how could you do this to me?

we were supposed to be

and I want you so badly

I need you, it's so maddening

cause I miss you

oh God I miss you.

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

This is utter heartache on paper, woven like a master spider's web. I felt emotion here, and promise is more than just one woman. If this is based on a real situation, I advise you, it takes 8 bad relationships to find your soul mate. Any less and it was like cutting the line on a hungry carp.

But hey, only half the people call me wise, and your word choice is amazing here! Bravo! :)

[cassandra ziemba]

this is a beautiful poem and i love how you wrote it as a song, there's a lot of feeling in this poem and i like that. keep up the good work and you could go far!

[Travis Prino]

Thank you so much for the comment. I really appreciate it and I'm glad you like it!