Guiding Light

I sit alone and watch the days go by

up in my room I just wonder why

please tell me now what can I do?

cause I would do anything for you

I'm living in my own personal hell

feels like I'm stuck living in a cell

can you do me a favor?

can you stay with me tonight?

give me something to savor

won't you be my guiding light?

you're running through my head all day long

but from your mind lately I've been gone

now tell me where did all your love go?

I love you, but I'm feeling so low

cause you don't love me anymore

and I am left here feeling insecure

can you do me a favor?

can you stay with me tonight?

give me something to savor

won't you be my guiding light?

all that's left now is my broken heart

I think of you and wish to go back to the start

now you're telling me that we're just friends

at this time the love between us ends

though my chances may seem real slim

I'll keep trying even if I can't win

can you do me a favor?

can you stay with me tonight?

give me something to savor

won't you be my guiding light?

you know that I love you

and even if you say that I won't do

that is something that will not change

I know the feelings that you're feeling are strange

maybe in time we will be together

and if so, maybe then it'll be forever

can you do me a favor?

can you stay with me tonight?

give me something to savor

won't you be my guiding light?

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Well done piece on lost love and longing to renew. Excellent flow and content. The structure is good. A very nice piece. Thanks,

[Travis Prino]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it!

[abderrahmane dakir]

Beautiful, I like this poem, thank you for sharing this awesome piece.

[Travis Prino]

Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it!