Rocking Chair

Rocking Chair

A Poem by Travis Mitchell

When that rocking chair you've watched day after day,
drift forward and back suddenly stops on it's linear track.

Motionless.

No longer living up to it's name.
It's just a chair.
Permanently altered by backward movement counteracting with the forward

Instead of watching the chair. Do what it can't do.

Never let the ever repeating momentum send you backwards

Move forward and and only forward.






© 2015 Travis Mitchell


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Amen!! keep the momentum, and keep moving forward. No static - it does no good to anyone.
I really like this great metaphor that you have used to carry on the message. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Travis Mitchell

9 Years Ago

Haha thank you so much for reading it:D and it means so much that you liked it. Haha originally I ju.. read more
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9 Years Ago

:D you are welcome - and there is no such a thing as a dumb idea in writing :D
Travis Mitchell

9 Years Ago

Yeah I figured that out pretty quick haha. Damn XP

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Added on May 2, 2015
Last Updated on May 2, 2015
Tags: Poetry, Chair, Movement, abstract, teen, coming of age