Complicating Jealousy

I wrote this when jealousy struck me as a way to let it out.

Jealousy is a b***h, 

Like a storm inside your head, 

Dark clouds hover over, 

Never seeming to end.

It hardens your heart, 

And eats away at your soul, 

It walks down a path, 

Of pure hatred and destruction. 

It's like a burning fire, 

Spreading from end to end, 

Nothing can put it out, 

Until you're left with blackness and a hole.

So don't let the shame take you, 

For there is light on the other side, 

It will eventually come to a halt, 

And keep passing until the end of time.

Author's Note

Please, comments and critique are welcome.

Reviews

[KWP]

it is true jealousy is a b***h !! I like how you ended on a positive not for yes there is always hope - nice flow of words X

[wordman]

you know travie this could fit in very nicely on this poetry site
great write