Two Lovers In A Final Embrace

I wrote this when I was bored one night.

I lay here in your warm embrace, 

Under a blanket of bright stars, 

Listening to the sound of your heart, 

As the blood is running through your veins.

When I look into your pretty eyes, 

It's like my world completely stops, 

And everything around turns to dust, 

Like all that's left is you and me.

I feel your hand reach into mine, 

As our fingers intertwine together, 

A sense of deep passion overwhelms me, 

Our love making up surrounding energy.

You slowly turn your head towards me, 

Our eyes meet and you start to cry, 

As I gently caress your cheek with my hand, 

We softly whisper our final goodbyes.  

Author's Note

Please, comments and critique are welcome.

Reviews

[wordman]

a sad poem my friend,but well written

[Cindy Marietta]

Awee this is so sweet and sad at the same time. It flowed really well too. I loved it