Two Lovers In A Final Embrace

I wrote this when I was bored one night.

I lay here in your warm embrace, 

Under a blanket of bright stars, 

Listening to the sound of your heart, 

As the blood is running through your veins.

When I look into your pretty eyes, 

It's like my world completely stops, 

And everything around turns to dust, 

Like all that's left is you and me.

I feel your hand reach into mine, 

As our fingers intertwine together, 

A sense of deep passion overwhelms me, 

Our love making up surrounding energy.

You slowly turn your head towards me, 

Our eyes meet and you start to cry, 

As I gently caress your cheek with my hand, 

We softly whisper our final goodbyes.  

Author's Note

Please, comments and critique are welcome.

Reviews

[Mary Ochoa]

Such a beautiful write!! :D Great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poetry.
"When I look into your pretty eyes,
It's like my world completely stops,
And everything around turns to dust,
Like all that's left is you and me."
I thought the poetry was a poem of forever love. You left me with a good bye. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kamari's]

So moving very good poem my friend

[ashleymarie]

The imagery is strong. This is incredible. Keep it up!

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This poem is almost musical. Beautiful work.╰☆╮

[Haley Wilson]

Love!!

[Dayran]

Its curious how the height of a love sensation ... always gives way to a separation ... and longing. Its ominous about life.

[Avinash]

Intimate and intense. Sometimes even final goodbye can be the most romantic moment.

[Emily]

Love the meaning!
Keep it up!