What Do We Really Have?

This is a poem I wrote when I was thinking about all of the things I have in my life.

I'm holding on to all that I've got, 

But it is slowly slipping away, 

Soon there will be nothing left, 

So lonely I am in this big ol' world.

I live every day, 

Trying to make it the best, 

I know that I don't have much, 

But this life is a test. 

We all go through pain and misery, 

But we can't let go of who we are, 

Why? Once we lose ourselves, 

We are left with nothing at all.

It's like a raging battle, 

That goes on and on, 

But no matter what, 

We must fight until the end.

Author's Note

Please, comments and critique are welcome.

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

It's always difficult to hold on to who we are through the battle that life brings. The message was clearly deciphered and had a great emotional impact. Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wise ending to the poem. We can't never give up or give in. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

[Tennessee]

Not bad kid, point made. Life is a b***h but hey what are you going to do about it? That is the real question ain't it?

[Bright Ocean Star]

Travis, this poem is so deep and thought provoking and tragic all wrapped up together in the same enchilada. It is rough being young and on your own. What your feeling is totally natural and human. You are lost at first, but you will find your way. Writing is a great way of sorting out your feelings and strengthening one of your God-given gifts. But when we are running around lost in the dark, it is good to remember, God wants us to turn to Him. He's always there, waiting patiently for us to ask for assistance, directions, or just get a hug. You're never really lost if you have God as your wingman. Take care, my friend.

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep them coming