Winter's Morning

This is a random poem I wrote that kind of reminds me of sitting in a coffee shop with a nice warm drink and the relaxing music that plays overhead on the intercom system.

Waking up one morning, 

To find snow on the ice cold ground, 

I hear kids playing in the distance, 

The fact that I'll have no school comes to mind.

I arise from my bed, 

Go to the kitchen and make cocoa, 

And as I look out my frosted window, 

I think to myself, "Finally, time to relax."

I walk to my living room, 

Turn on music soft to the ears, 

A fireplace with the brightest flame, 

The feeling becomes nothing but peace.

I sit in the recliner, 

Pick up a paper and pen, 

And as I sit back to write, 

I think to myself, "Days like this are what makes life so joyful."

Author's Note

Please, comments and critique are welcome.

Reviews

[Nyu]

Thats really calming and peaceful to the point of soothing my own self. thank you :)

[Jon Roggie]

I couldn't agree more. I love stormy weather for this reason. Only one critique, should "walking" be "waking"? Very enjoyable write.

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more keep them coming

[Emily]

This is so true! Good Write.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Winter days are good for writing. I do my best writing with the cold or a rainy day. I like the internal thoughts and being content to relax and write. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aethereal]

You described your early morning mood beautifully in this free verse poem. I enjoyed the thirteen sequential functions (verbs) that you used to express this mood. This poem moves along like a locomotive energized by the buzz of morning.