Lost Love

I love God but we've had these types of conversations.

Ever since I was a kid I've lost love,

Death was my best friend that kept giving hugs,

I learned the hard way to not let anyone close,

As a man my hard heart I would proudly boast,

Now, I'm getting older and the cold takes it's toll,

Every positive feeling I feel is me getting fooled,

Jesus tried to catch me, but I fell through the holes,

Hell bound is okay when you already walk on coals,

I prayed to God to soften my heart,

Send me a wife so I can love his art,

I asked for an Eve and he gave me you,

A perfect fit for my life that's been long overdue, 

I got too comfortable and I let you in,

I could feel the devil over my shoulder with a devilish grin,

I loved you but you married him,

Now that I can't stop my love's a sin?

You could stop with those words if you've had enough,

When did God turn wedding rings into handcuffs?

This has all been emotionally strenuous, 

I'd pray but I don't know if God is an ally or nemesis,

Ever since I was a kid I've lost love,

From the people here, her, the devil below, and God above.

Reviews

[Love yourself]

Wow!! The poem is just awesome and the way you decribed about love and everything that has happened is really perfect.
You actually wrote a heart touching poem
WELL DONE

[Stars and Whales]

Holy crap your writing is amazing! I'm actually blown away. I wasn't expecting that, I think your writing style was unique and very, very good! Good work, I'll be sure to keep checking in and reading your stuff!

I just wrote my first screenplay, my first script, maybe could you give me some advice?? You're great. Or maybe we could work together in the future? Let me know, I'm all in. Here's the link to my script...

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/samfths/1865804/