Goodbye Forever

She can't see me , It's been a dream
All this time i thought you was still here
But it was just a dream , Oh all the sadness
I've seen, This is the worst I've ever felt
Sing to me please, Please sing to me
Take this pain away , It's tearing me apart
Again these fears overcome me
Searching for a bright light to overtake me
This was the day she died... The day she died

Chorus

Driving my ambitions to the extreme
Serving my vows to thy lord
And this is what i get, Goodbye Forever
Darling you're still in the picture framed
Gold with diamonds, Let me treasure you
Goodbye Forever, Thank you for everything
Amazing but sad that you're only a dream now
Goodbye Forever, I will never forget you

Verse 2

Legging it to the bottom of the staircase
Stranded in my basement
I need to get these demons out of me
Oh glory, so divined drugs
You've been nothing but trouble for me
You make me feel good, Just not this time
I think it's time for me to say Goodbye Forever

Goodbye Forever, I need to sleep
Goodbye Forever , She's waiting for me
 
  
 

Reviews

[crumblinginwards]

this is so great, gary. you should really put yourself out there with your work. i would love to see that - i don't know, start a youtube channel, pull your best works together and go out selling them. one time i bought a small collection of works from an MFA student in Berkeley. maybe i was the only one who bought her work, but actually, in the end, i appreciated it. go for it.

and hey, it's never too late to go back to school. NEVER, and i mean NEVER. gary, you're really a great writer, and if you're up for it, you can always think about going back to school. really consider it, because it is ALWAYS POSSIBLE.

in the meantime, i would love for you to find additional ways to share your work in your community. a youtube channel is a good start, maybe with you posting advertisements in coffee shops. i hope more people read your writing. it deserves to be read.

and i hope you know, as i said before, it is NEVER too late to go back to school. you can do it, gary, i'm rooting for you. keep us updated on how you're doing : ). thanks again so much for your writing! it is as alive as it should be, in a very desperate, cold world, your heart is alive and beating, and i hope you keep it that way, fighting the good fight, and creating life, as you are : ).

[lindsay]

This pulled on heart for sure. So emotional and so heart wrenchingly beautiful.