The Straight Line

I've known you for so long
And the distance is so far wide
To conclude can i please have something
More than a dream that's gone in the morning
But still in my head through out time
The more i sleep the longer i can dream
Could this be an option of internal rest
I'm at peace with my mind and my smile is showing

Chorus

You make me so happy, Lets sail the seven seas
Clap clap here we go again! I've seen this all before
Another cold morning in winter , Rise from bed slowly
This is the straight line between life
The stress is unbearable , Depression is a disease
To caught in my ways to see straight , A straight line
Wobbly, jagged at the edge cause by abusing drugs
This is not what i asked for , I asked for you

Verse 2

Square dance while the rain pours down
No need for romance in the sun ,
This is the straight line between life
When im holding your hand 
I can scream a thousand times burning bridges
Contemplate revenge on my emery's
Distance means everything ,
I can't stand the miles
Just stand the straight line
 
  
 

Reviews

[Dai Hanshou]

Comma splices, and you forgot to capitalize I's.