Taylor ( I Can't Breathe )

Verse 1

Maybe I should have left this town long ago
So i could stop being the stranger in night
So i could be the romance 
I'm just a young man
Standing along while the rain pours down
A peddle follows the stream , To an unknown destination
I wonder where I'm heading next

Chorus

A velvet rose in my hand
I hope that she accept this because i can't breathe
The first time i set my eyes upon you
Your smile was so Inviting
I was fixed upon that kind voice
Taylor was her name

Verse 2

Standing on death row , These predictions can't be true
Hidden between the shadows of my heart
I can feel something there , Something long ago
I wish i could remember these feelings
These feelings called LOVE 


Chorus 2

If i open my heart will you infect every single bit
Inside my heart , It's yours for taking
I want to treasure the feelings you've given me
These memories will last forever
Taylor ( I Can't Breathe )
I long for you


I'm standing thanks to you
I'm smiling because of you
I'm happy because i love you
Forever and always you're by my side


 

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Very nice! I really liked this. It had a nice flow to it, and a very relatable story behind it too.
My favourite section was Chorus 2.
I found this piece to be very genuine and heartfelt, and I thought that you portrayed the emotions very well.
Good job! =]
~PaperHearts