"The Fear Of Depression"

I wrote this to describe how my mental illness affects me.

Lost & scared
come with me
i'm right here
all you need is care
but nobody is here
what happens when
fear gets in your ear
... desperate desire to
be free from everyone
so far no one can dare
lost soul come here
my dear ... let me take care
I've watched you grow and it's
clear your not happy here
so come with me let me
make your soul pure
all it takes is one cure
can't you see your not
wanted here ?
why do you pretend
like they care.
Living day to day
saying it's going to get
better from here
why don't you end it here ?
give your soul to me, and you won't shed a tear.. i promise my dear.. let me take care... you'll be fine from here... just sit back & enjoy freedom from eternal fear.. don't
worry about who's calling you your
almost there.... Follow me to the sky
everythings going to be all right
they can't hear you now. let your soul fly. you'll see them again in due time.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.

Reviews

[Ghost]

I love this. It's got a fun twist to it

[Lotus Flower]

I like the way you use your words in this piece, very attention holding and i also like the message Good Job