He said

It's just an example of how far love can take one person. Wether your a boy or girl . This piece represents everyone who is tired of being used for their bodies, and not loved for their minds .

Baby I love you he said
When his lips touched hers.
She was unaware that She was signing
Her heart away with the twirling of her tongue on his,
He pulled her in closer she can smell his scent,
She instantly melts.
As she caught a whiff.

Baby I love you he said
while looking into her eyes,
He held her tight, she can feel His
love growing on her thigh,
He had her transfixed in an ultimate high.
Why....oh ..... why ?
If this is wrong, She doesn't want to be right

Baby I love you he said
Come to bed, let me make love to
you, and erase what was said
He looked her in her eyes
And tilted his head
She climbed on to his lap, and pushed
him to the bed, Lifted up her skirt
And rode him to death, No literally, She rode him to death,
cause when he closed his eyes that f**k n***a was dead.

Bang...... Bang

I loved him She said
But somewhere between
lost and had She lost herself instead,
Love was lost and She was numb
She sat with a blank face
and stared into the unkown
skin flushed, similar to the one she once known
She glanced at the corner of her eye and noticed her savior in disguise..
she tilted her head back and closed her eyes....

Bang.......Bang ...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[magensby]

A bit confused with the ending. He said a lot but meant little. A narrative step back step to a tragic end for both. Loss for both. Leaves the reader with a weight that they didn't have at the beginning. Effected a change. Good job.

[Alexis]

well just as confused you are about the ending thats exactly how i wanted you the reader to feel because often at times love can feel confusing. and sometimes love and lead to tragic endings . in this case its the frustration of not being loved back and only being loved for sexual pleasures when all in all that person just wanted to be loved back. in the end the reality was too much to bare . which cane to the tragic ending ! i know this is a year later but i hope it explains just a little and thank you ! ❤️